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PostSubject: KYA KRE DOGA   Wed Jun 27, 2012 7:49 pm

Yha mai doga ki likhi story kya kre doga lgaunga jinke review aap is link par http://icufco.forumotions.in/t92-kya-kre-doga-review de sakte hai.
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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Wed Jun 27, 2012 7:58 pm

Part-1

Mumbai-sapno ki nagri jispar har apradhi hukumat karna chahta hai chote se lekar bda. par doga k rahte aajtak koi mumbai par raj nhi kar paya.chote mote apradhi apni is ichha ko daba lene me hi apni bhalai samjhte hai par bade-2 apradhi is ichha ko puri karne me lge rahte hai.aur aisa karne k liye unhe power ki jarurat padti hai.power mean rajnitik support,vidwansk hatiyar etc.par bina money k ye sab mumkin nhi aur money milega banko me,maldar jagaho par.

danger gang bi apni is ichha ko puri karne me lga hua hai.aur usne apne aadmiyo ko lutpat karne k liye bheja hai.
Kaliya-tod de shuttar ka darwaza aur lut lo sari jwelari.par jaldi karna.
Patta-jaldi kya hai police ko rakam pahucha diya gya hai.is ilake me 2 ghante tak koi policewala nazar nhi aayega.tension mat le.
Kaliya-police se kaun darta hai vah to apni hi party hai dar to doga ka hai.
Patta-dhat tere ki.
Darta kahe ko hai hmara ek aur group yha se 20km dur ek shop ko lut rha hai.doga koi bhagwan nhi hai jo dono jagah ek hi samay par pahuch jaye.
Tabhi do behosh wha girte hai aur ek jordar aawaj gunjati hai wha-inki hi bat kar rha hai kya?
Patta-k....kaun?
Aawaj ka malik-kutte si is surat ko akkha mumbai pahchanti hai.nam hai doga.
Patta aur kaliya-h....hme maaf kar do doga aage se ham aisa kabhi nhi karenge?
Doga-wo to tum waise bi nhi karoge tute huye hath-pairo se dakaiti nhi dali ja sakti hai.
Iske bad doga unke hath-pair tod dalta hai.
Bechare patta aur kaliya dard se behosh ho gye the.
Doga (ek kutte se)-thank you sheru jo tune pahle hi mujhe inki skim bta di thi.mai chahta to inhe pahle bi rok sakta tha par doga apradhiyo ko sabuto k sath pakadta hai.
Idhar danger gang ka boss 'sanki' ka dimag sanka hua tha doga ka karnama jankar.
Sanki-doga hmara har plan fail karta ja rha hai use thikane lgana hoga.
Tabhi telephone ki ghanti bajti hai.sanki phone uthata hai.
Sanki-kaun?
Dusri taraf se-hello mai neta narayan bol rha hu.tumhe ek kam karna hai.badle me 5 crore dunga.
Sanki-kam bolo.
Narayan-tumhe meri party k neta satyjeet ko marna hai.uske marne par mai hi cm bnunga yha ka.
Sanki-par tumhari parti k jeetne ka chance vipakshi partio se kam hai.
Narayan-ye rajniti ka khel hai jo tum nhi samjhoge mai ek teer se do nishane lgaunga.
1. Apni party ka adhyaksh
2. Janta ki sahanbhuti.ye janta badi bevkuf hoti hai unhe mai ye kahunga ki ye hamle vipakshi party ne karwaye hai to wah aankh mundkar mera vishwas karengi aur meri party ko vote dengi.
Bolo kroge mera kam kam.
Sanki-kar dunga par rokda jyada chahiye.
10crore
narayan-manjur hai par sath hi aur bi aadmi marne chahiye taki vipakshiyo ko bachao ka rasta na mile.
Sanki-manjur hai.
Iske bad phone kat jata hai.
Sanki ka ek aadmi jaggu-par doga is kam ko bi na bigad de.
Sanki-ghabrao mat doga rat ko niklta hai aur ham apna kam subah me karenge.

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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Wed Jun 27, 2012 8:00 pm

Part 2
Sanki-Suno kal satyjeet ek park me ja rha hai apni party k prachar k liye whi par uski bi samadhi bna diya jayega.doga subah me aayega ni aur police se hme narayan bacha lega.aur narayan ko bi ham apna sathi bna lenge aur doga ko khatm karwane me uski madad lenge.
Agli subah-
lion jim-
adrak chacha-suraj tujhe koi kam ho to jaldi se nipta le.
Suraj-koi kam to nhi hai par bat kya hai?
Adrak chacha-to phir jim ki dhekhbhal kar Smile mai apne dost satyjeet se milne ja rha hu jo ki aaj yha aane wala hai.

Park me-
satyjeet janta ka vishwas hasil karne wha aaya hua tha aur bhashan de rha tha.
Wha par adrak chacha bi pahuch gye the aur manch k samne the.idhar danger gang wale bi wha pahuch gye the aur hamle ki taiyari kar rhe the.
Danger gang ka ek aadmi-jaldi se kam pura kro warna agar satyjeet yha se jindi wapis chala gya to boss hmari khal khichva denge.
Dusra-is bomb ko satyjeet k upar fenk kar bhag chalo isse satyjeet k sath-2 aas-pass k aadmi bi mare jayenge.
Aur gunde bomb satyjeet k upar fenk dete hai.bomb dhekhkar wha hungama mach jata hai aur sare idhar udhar bhagne lagte hai.satyjeet k bodyguard bi kuch samajh nhi pate ki ye achanak kya hua.wah abhi satyeet ko bachane ki soch rhe the ki tabhi adrak chacha satyjeet ki taraf bhagte hai aur use pakadkar dusri taraf kud hi rhe the ki bomb phat gya.visfot k karan adrak chacha ghayal ho gye the par satyjeet ko halki si chot lgi.kyuki adrak chacha samay rahte kud gye aur bomb k raste me unka sharir kavach ban gya tha satyjeet ka.satyjeet ne jaldi se ambulance mangwaya aur adrak chacha ko usme admit karwaya.sath hi aur bi jitne ghayal huye the unhe bi admit kiya gya.
Idhar suraj is nayi ghatna se bekhabar gym me kasarat kar rha tha.tabhi moharsingh bhaga bhaga aaya aur ghabraye huye kha-suraj wo...wo adrak chacha
suraj hairani me-kya hua ghabra kyu rhe ho ?kya hua adrak chacha ko?
Moharsingh-adrak chacha aaj jha gye the wha bomb visfot ho gya aur chacha ghayal ho gye.news par dhikhaya ja rha hai.
Suraj bhagkar news dhekhne jata hai.
News me dhikhaya ja rha tha-
aaj satyjeet par katilana hamla hua jisme wo bal bal bache.kuch gundo ne unki sabha me bomb fenk diya tha ek bahadur bujurg adrak jinhe satyjeet apna dost bta rhe hai wo inhe bachane me ghayal ho gye hai unki halat nazuk btayi ja rhi hai. aur inke alava bi kuch aur vyakti ghayal huye hai. Sabhi ko city hospital me bharti kiya gya hai.inme se 5 ki maut ho gyi hai.bomb fhekne walo ka abhi kuch pta nhi chala hai.police janch me juti hai. Ab ham lete hai break.
Suraj jaldi se city hospital jata hai.wha vah adrak chacha ka pta lgakar unke pas jata hai.pta lgakar vah adrak chacha k kebin me pahuchta hai.adrak chacha khun se lathpath behosh the.
Suraj (doctor se)-ye shi hai na?
Doctor-abhi kuch kha nhi ja sakta khun kafhi bah gya hai.abhi 10hours bad hi kuch kha ja sakta hai.
Suraj adrak chacha ko dhekhte huye-"aapke sharir se gire ek ek khun ki kasam khatha hu ki jab tak aapki ye halat karnewalo ko isse bi bura hal nhi kar deta aur mar nhi deta tab tak aapko apna chehra nhi dhikhaunga.na suraj k rup me na doga k rup me"
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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Wed Jun 27, 2012 8:01 pm

Part 3
hospital me-
haldi,kali aur dhaniya chacha k alava monika aur cheeta bi wha pahuch gye the.suraj aur moharsingh pahle se hi wha maujud the.
Cheeta-adrak chacha theek hai na?
Suraj-doctor abhi kuch ni bta rhe hai.10hours bad hi kuch kah sakte hai wo.
Kali chacha-khuda salamat rakhe mere bhai ko.
Aisa hi kuch haldi aur dhaniya chacha ne bi kha.

Idhar rat bi ghirne ko aa gyi thi.
Suraj-aaplog chacha ka dhyan rakhiyega aaj doga ka kahar mumbai k apradhiydn par barsega.
Cheeta-tum khi nhi jaoge suraj ha tum khi nhi jaoge kyuki mai janta hu ki adrak chacha par huye hamle se tum pagal ho gye ho aur aaj tum kisi bhukhe darinde ki tarah apradhiyo me hadkamp macha doge.isiliye aaj tum khi nhi jaoge.is halat me tumhe nuksan bi pahuch sakta hai.
Suraj-tufan ko koi nhi rok sakta aur aaj doga ek tufan ban gya hai.maine adrak chacha ki kasam khayi hai ki mai ab tab tak unke samne nhi aaunga jab tak unki halat k jimmedar logo ko maut k muh me nhi pahucha deta.isliye mai kahta hu mujhe mat roko cheeta.aaj doga kisi ko nhi pahchanega kyuki hamla uske khuda par hua hai.aur khuda par huye hamle ko doga bardhast nhi kar sakta.
Suraj ki gusse se lal aur chehre par ki bhayankta ko dhekhkar kisi ki kuch kahne ki himmat nhi huyi.aur suraj wha se chala gya.
Cheeta-aaj ki rat koi apradhi na hi nikle to ganimat hai.warna doga ka kahar jhel nhi payega wo.

Idhar suraj kutte ka mask pahan kar ban chuka tha doga jiske chehre par jwalamukhi jaise bhav the.
Doga kutta fauz se -jao aur khi bi apradh hota dhike to mujhe btao aaj ya to apradhi doga k dar se mumbai chodkar bhagenge ya fir yamraj unki aatmaye le jayega.
Doga ki aawaj me janoon tha apradh k khilaf aur tha apradhiyo k khilaf bhadka uska jag prasid gussa.
Doga chal pda us hamlavar ki talash me jiske karan uske khuda adrak aaj hospital me jindgi aur maut se lad rhe the.

Idhar danger gang ka boss sanki phone par narayan se bat kar rha tha
sanki-bach gya us adrak ki wajah se satyjeet bach gya. par agli bar nhi bachega.jaldi hi uski maut ki khabar tum newspaper me padoge.mai dubai ka don no 1 isliye dubai chodkar yha mumbai me nhi aaya ki mujhe nakami hath lge mai yha hukumat karne aaya hu na ki harne.us doga ka bi hisab karunga doga mujhe mar na paye iska bi mai intzam karke rakhunga.
Narayan-apni kahani bad me sunaiyo aur doga ko mar goli.pahle satyjeet ka kam tamam karke hi dhikha de.kyuki uspar huye hamle se uski suraksh me police force bda di gyi hai.ab uspar hamla karna mushkil hai.
Sanki-mushkil kam ko karne me hi is bande ko maza aata hai.aasan kam to koi bi kar sakta hai.ab aaram se baitho mujhe use marne ka plan bnane do.
Iske bad sanki phone rakh deta hai.

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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Wed Jun 27, 2012 8:02 pm

Part 4

doga nikal pda tha hamlavar ki khoj me aur idhar hamlavar satyjeet ko apna shikar bnane k liye baichain tha.

Doga ek bar me pahuchta hai jha mumbai k chante huye badhmas aate the.doga ko wha dhekh wha bhagdhad mach gyi par doga gate k theek samne tha aur wha se koi doga se bachkar bhag nhi sakta tha ab sabko doga ka samna karna hi tha. kai goliya ek sath chal padi.
Dhany dhany dhany
aur wo goliya doga ko lag bi jati par doga pahle hi wha se hat chuka tha.aur usne bi apne hathiyaro ka munh khol diya.jha gundo ki aag ki tarah barsati goliyo k beech bi doga aaram se bach ja rha tha whi doga ki chalayi har goli gundo ko apna shikar bna rhi thi.jaldi hi wha sabhi gunde ya to ghayal pde the ya fir mre huye.sabhi gundo ko markar ya ghayal kar doga bar k malik ko khojta hua uske pas pahuchta hai aur usse garjate huye phuchta hai-tujhe maine abhi is liye nhi mara taki tu mere kuch sawalo k jawab de.aaj subah me satyjeet ko marne k liye jo bomb visfot hua tha wah kisne karwaya tha?mai janta hu yha har tarah k apradhi aate hai tujhe uska pta jarur hoga?
doga k is rup ko dhekhkar malik dar gya tha.
Malik-mujhe nhi pta doga m..mai such kah rha hu.
Doga-kan kholkar sun le aur apne jat bhaiyo ko bi btla dena ki agr 3 ghante k andar andar wah apradhi doga ko nhi mila to doga mumbai k underworld me hungama macha dega aur jaisa hal is bar ka kiya hai usse kai guna jyada bura hal kar dunga.aur ha is beech ek bi gunde ne agr koi apradh karna chaha aur wah mujhe dikh gya to vah us din ko kosega jis din vah paida hua tha.
Doga ki bate sunkar malik ka chehra pasine se bhar gya.
Malik-th...thik hai doga mai tumhara ye sandesh sabhi k pas pahucha dunga.
Doga wha se chala jata hai idhar malik ne underworld ki nami girami hastiyo ko doga ka sandesh pahucha diya tha.
mumbai underworld me doga ka dar baith gya tha sare apradhi us hamlavar ki talash me lag gye.
Idhar doga bi hamlawar ki talash me tha.
Ab pure underworld ko doga ka sandesh mile sanki ko na mile aisa bhala kaise ho sakta hai.sanki ka ek aadmi sanki ko doga ka sandesh suna rha tha.
Gunda-bhai apna boriya bistar sameto aur yha se bhago.vah doga tumhe paglaye kutte ki mafik khojta fir rha hai aur usne mumbai underworld ko ye altimatam diya hai ki 3ghante k andar agr bomb visfot ka jimmedar yani aap ni mile to wah ek ek apradhi ko dund dundkar use kutte ki maut marega.
Sanki ye bat sunkar ghabraya nhi balki wah kuch sochne lga.
Sanki-lagta hai apni chal chalni padegi.
Aur wah ek jagah call lagata hai.
Sanki-h..hello neha.
Neha -hello kaun?
Sanki-m..mai amar bol rha hu tumhara amar.
Neha-amar kya hua tumko tum ghabra kyu rhe ho?
Sanki-mujhe kuch gunde mar dena chahte hai.
Neha-p..par kyu?tumse kisi ki kya dusmani ho sakti hai?
Sanki-mujhe unke khilaf sabut mil gya tha.mai vah sabut police aur doga ko dena chahta tha par gundo ne mujhpar ek hatya ka ilzam lga diya hai aur isse doga aur police bi ab mere khilaf ho gya hai.ab mai nhi bachunga.tum yha se chali jao warna ve tumhe bi mar dalenge.
Itna kahkar sanki ne phone kat diya.
Sanki-jaggu apne kuch aadmiyo ko bhejo is drane k liye taki ise yakeen ho jaye mai such kah rha hu.
Jaggu-ye neha kaun hai boss?
Sanki-ye meri bewkuf patni hai jo yah samajhti hai mai ek sharif business man hai.ab isi ko hatiyar bnakar mai doga se bachunga.
Jaggu-par wah kya kregi?
Sanki-vah behad chalak hai mujhe bachane ka koi na koi tarkeeb soch legi.
Jaggu-abhi aap use bevkuf kah rhe the aur abhi behad chalak ye mamla samajh me ni aaya.
Sanki-mere samne vah bevkuf hai par dusro ko vah kafi aasani se ullu bna deti hai.vah jugad kar hi legi.
Iske bad sanki kuch sochne lagta hai.
Jaggu-kya soch rhe ho boss?
Sanki-ek bat mai soch rha hu yha hmesha koi na koi bomb visfot hota rahta hai roj koi na koi marta hai ghayal hota hai par doga ko itna pagal kisi ne nhi dhekha.jarur is bomb visfot me us kutte ki surat k phiche chhipe chehre ka koi nazdiki ghayal hua hai ya mara gya hai.
Jaggu-aap theek kahte hai boss aisa hi hua hoga.
Sanki-bas hme ye pta lgana hai wah shakhs kaun hai?
Tabhi ek gunda aata hai aur sanki se kahta hai.
Gunda-boss.ek khushkhabri hai aapke liye jise sunkar aap nach uthenge.


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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:46 am

Part 5

doga ne de diya mumbai underworld ko altimatam ki agr 3 ghanto k andar andar use bomb visfot ka hamlavar nhi mila to vah mumbai se underworld ka namonishan mita dega chahe apradh ho rha ho ya nhi.
Is altimatam se underworld me hungama macha hua tha.har apradhi ya to hamlavar ko khojne me lga the ya apna boriya-bister samet kar mumbai se bhag jana chahta tha.koi bi doga nam ki musibat se uljhana nhi chahta tha.
Doga ko altimatam diye 1ghanta khatam ho chuka tha aur bomb visfot karne wale k bare me kisi ko kuch pta nhi tha.

Idhar bomb visfot ka master mind doga se bachne ki tarkib lga rha tha ki tabhi uske gang k 2-3 gunde uske pas aate hai aur unme se ek gunda kahta hai-boss aapke liye ek khushkhabri hai.
Sanki-satyjeet ko mar dala kya tumlogo ne jiske liye maine tumhe city hospital me bheja tha taki agar satyjeet mareejo ko dhekhne ya apni jan bachane wale dost se milne aaye to tumlog whi satyjeet ko mar sko.
Ek gunda-nhi boss hamne satyjeet ko nhi mara par usse bi bdi khushkhabri hai.
Sanki-jaldi bolo mera dimag abhi sanka hua hai wo kutta doga mujhe kisi kutte ki mafik hi dundhta fir rha hai.
Gunda-boss aapko us kutte se preshan hone ki jarurat nhi hai.
Aur fir vah kuch bate boss ko btane lga jise sunkar sanki bahut khush ho gya.
Sanki-wah bahut hi kam ki khabar laye ho.tumne dhekha ki kaun tha wo?
Gunda-nhi boss ham to ye bat aapko btane k liye turant wha se chal diye the par jam me phanse k karan kafi der ho gyi.
Sanki apne hatho ko sir par rakhte huye jhunjhalkar bola-bevkufo,ghadho,nalayako tumhe gang me kisne bharti kiya.phone nhi kar sakte the kya? ab hme us aadmi ka pta kaise chalega?
Gunda-network nhi mil rha tha boss aur hamne p.c.o. se phone karne ka khatra nhi uthaya.isse police ko bhanak lag sakti thi.ek mauka de do.vah aadmi usse milne dubara jarur aayega tab hme malum chal jayega.
Sanki-jao aur pta kro.aur acha kiya jo p.c.o. se phone nhi kiya.
gunde wapas chale jate hai.
Sanki-ha ha ha bina kuch kre hi doga hmari pakad me aa jayega.ab us doga se mai karwaunga satyjeet ka murder aur use mera kam karna hi hoga.
Achanak kuch yad aata hai sanki ko aur vah jaggu se puchta hai.
Sanki-hmare gunde neha k ghar tak pahuch gye ki nhi aur ha ek nirdhesh unhe de do neha par attack is tarah se hona chahiye ki use aisa mahsoos ho jaise hmare gunde sachmuch uski jan lena chahte hai.par ha in sabme neha ko koi nukshan nhi pahuchna chahiye.
Jaggu-theek hai boss.

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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:47 am

Part-6

sanki-waise to ab mujhe neha ki jarurat rhi nhi kyuki doga ki nabj mere kabje me aa gyi hai par kya pta wah doga aur police par se mera dhyan hta de.jaggu ek kam kar mumbai k sabhi kukhayt mafiyao ko yha bula.kahna jaruri meeting hai doga se related.
Jaggu-par kyu boss?
Sanki-pahle bula fir btaunga.

Idhar doga ne apni altrasonic city bjakar kutta fauz ko bula liya tha.
Doga-grrr bho bhonk bhow bho bhow bho grrr(agr khi bi tumhe koi apradh karta huya mile ya agr kisi gundo ko subah huye bomb vishfot k bare me bate karte dhekho to mujhe turant suchit kro).
Kutte-bho bho grrr(theek hai doga).

Iske bad kutta fauz mumbai me fail gyi.

Whi underworld k nami hastiya meeting me pahuch gye the.ye meeting doga ko khatam karne k liye thi.
Sanki-bhaiyo pani sir se upar aa gya hai.wo doga apne aap ko samajhta kya hai jab chaha hme hukm de diya.are hum apni marji k malik hai sala hum jis profession me hai usme to har waqt doga ka,police ka bhay bna rahega aur usme doga ki aisi dhamki isse to hmara dhandha pani hi band ho jayega mujhe khud aaj croro rs k mal ki deal karni thi par wah haramkhor dusri party doga k dar se aayi hi nhi.aisi hi problem aap sab k sath bi hogi.

kutte ne hamko dhamki di hai ki 3 ghante k andar us hamlavar ko khoj kar laye.are hme kya pta kaun tha wo agr ham itne hi bde jasus hote to us kutte k chehre k phiche chhipe insan ko dund na lete jo kai salo se hmari nak me dum kiya hua hai.mai ek sal se mumbai me hu par mere aadhe se jyada deal us doga k karan u hi bekar chale gye.is 1 sal me hi mere croro ka mal us doga k karan khatm ho gya.mai samajh sakta hu aap sab ki kya halat ki hogi us kutte ne.waqt aa gya hai ki hme doga nam k aafat k putle ko milkar khatam kar dena chahiye.Doga hme ek ek karke to aasani se mar sakta hai par agr ham ekjut ho jaye to hmari takat k samne doga ki bolti band ho jayegi.tum sab ka kya kahna hai kya tum sab eksath milkar doga ko khatam karne k liye razi ho.
Ek mafiya boss ranja ustad-bhidu tu theek kah riya hai wo doga hamko apni ungali par ghumana chahta hai.agr hme uski ungli par hi ghumna tha to isse achha to hme sarendar kar dena chahiye tha 2waqt ki roti aaram se milti fir kisi ka bhay nhi rahta.mai tere sath hu bhidu.

Isi tarah sabhi mafiya boss ne bi doga ko marne ka samrthan kiya.sabhi doga k karan preshan the.
Sanki-theek hai bhaiyo abhi doga ka diya time pura hone me 1:30h hai aap aadhe ghante k andar apne sare aadmiyo aur asla barood k sath yha miliye mai chahta hu kutte k diye time k andar hi ham use parlok ka rasta dhikha de.
Is prakar meeting khatam ho jati hai aur sare mafiya wale taiyari karne me lag jate hai.
Jaggu-ye kya tha boss abhi kuch der pahle aap kah rhe the doga k hatho hi satyjeet ko marwayenge aur idhar aap doga ko marne ka bi plan bna rhe hai.ye chakkar kuch samajh me nhi aaya.
Sanki-chakkar ko rahne de bus itna samajh ki ye doga ko marne ki meeting nhi in mafiyawalo ko marwane ki meeting thi. Ye log doga ko mar payenge nhi balki doga k hatho mar dale jayenge.uske bad chote-mote apradhi hi bachenge jo mere samne kuch bi nhi.phir mumbai par mera kabja ho jayega.mai bnunga mumbai ka betaz badshah.doga mere kabje me rahega aur narayan k rahte police bi mera kuch bigad nhi payegi.hahaha

doga galiyo me bomb visfot k jimmedar ki khoj me ghumta fir rha tha ki tabhi use ek ladki bhagti dhikhayi di. uske phiche kuch gunde pde huye the(wah ladki neha hi thi).

Doga ka chehra gusse se bhar gya aur wah ladki aur un gundo k beech me aa gya.
Ek gunda apne sathi ghundo se phuphsaya-bhag chalo doga pagal ho gya hai isse abhi uljho mat boss ne ladki ko drane ko bheja tha aur hamne apna kam kar diya hai.
Aur aisa sochkar wo wapas phiche bhagne lge par doga ne sabhi gundo k pairo ko apna nishana bna liya.
Doga-chahta to ye goli tumhare dilo me bi mar sakta tha par doga samne se war karta hai phit phiche nhi.isliye tumhe rokne k liye tumhare pairo par goli chalani pdi.meri chetavni k bavjud bi tumlog apni harkato se baz nhi aaye.ab dhekho doga kya halat karta hai tumhari aur aisa kahkar doga ne unhe ek sath bhandh diya aur fir apni kuttta fauz ko bulaya.
Doga-garr gur gur bhow(doga ki taraf se davat ka maza lo inki botiya aaram se dhire-2 nochkar khao inhe itna tadpao itna tadpao jitna ye soch bi na sake inki aisi halat kar do jise dhekhkar inke jaise gundo ka kaleja bi hil jaye aur vah apradh karne se pahle hzar bar soche.)
ab doga neha ki taraf mudta hai aur usse puchta hai-kaun ho tum?ye gunde tumhare phiche kyu pde huye the?
Neha-mera nam neha hai aur fir vah sari ghatna bta deti hai.
Fir kahti hai-doga mere pti nirdhosh hai unhe fansaya gya hai unhe bcha lo.
Doga-ghabrao mat tumhare pti ko kuch nhi hoga.
Neha-m...magar police bi mere pti ki talash me hai aur gunde bi.gunde unhe fir kisi aur musibat me bi phasha sakte hai.a...aur kya pta tum unke bahkave me aa jao n..nhi mujhe yakin nhi hai.
Doga-fir tumhi btao mai kaise tumhe yakeen dilau?

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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:48 am

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neha-m..mai kya karu jisse mujhe yakin ho jaye ki tum sach kah rhe ho.ha ha ek upay hai.aur aisa kahkar usne apni sadee k ek kinare ko halka phadne lgi.
Doga-ye ye kya kar rhi ho?
Neha-apne aap ko yakin dilane ka upay.aur usne phate huye tukde ko doga ki kalai par bandh diya.

Doga(hairani mai)-ye tukda mere hatho me kyu bandh rhi ho.

Neha-ha ye mahaj ek tukda hi hai tumhare liye par mere liye us rakhi k dhage k saman hai jo ek behan apne bhai ko bandhti hai.ab tum kho ki mere pti ko kuch nhi hoga.

Doga asmanjas me pad jata hai ki kya kre fir kuch der sochne k bad-thik hai behan mai is dhage ki saugand khata hu ki tumhare pti ko marne nhi dunga.aur use police aur gundo k shiknge se aajad kraunga.

Kutto ne gundo ki jagah jagah se botiya kat di thi.kai jagah se unki haddiya dhikhi de rhi thi par we abhi mre nhi the behosh jarur ho gye the dard k karan.
Doga-chod do inhe.taki ye apni is halat par jab tak jinda rhe tadpte rhe aur ye tadpan inhe jindgi bhar inke apradho k gunah ki yad dilata rhe.
Ek saya kafi der se doga ki in harkto ko dhekh rha tha par doga ko iski bhanak nhi thi.
doga gundo ko saza dekar chal pda apne shikar ko khojne.

Sanki k adde par mafiya apne pure dal k sath aa gye the.laghbhag 1000 k pas ya usse jyada gunde the ghatak hatiyaro se less.sanki man hi man khush ho rha tha ki aaj ek jhatke me vah mumbai k apradh jagah ka king ban jane wala tha.
Sanki-hamari ekjut takat k samne doga thahar nhi payega chalo milkar khatam kar de.
Ek mafia boss-par doga ko dhundhe kaise?
Dusra mafia boss-aasan hai jha apradh hota hai wha doga pahuch jata hai hmare kuch aadmi mumbai me apradho ki bhad la denge jiski khabar doga ko jarur milegi aur vah kutta inhe dhundhta huye jarur aayega aur wahi uski kabr bna di jayegi.
Teesra mafia boss-aur agar raste me koi kutta mile to use mar dalna doga ki wafadari karte hai.saza to milni chahiye.
Sabhi gundo ne plan bna liya tha doga ko marne ka.
Aur kafila chal pda doga ko marne.
Sabhi car,bike etc par sawar the.
Raste me milte har kutte ko vah marte ja rhe the aur ek sandesh bi-kutto ki wafadari ka doga ko inam.agar ab bi doga na mana to doga ka hal in kutto se bi dardnak hoga.doga ko bachna hai to mumbai chodkar bhag jaye.
Aur gunde shehar me aatank failane lge.in gatnao ki suchna police ko lgi aur we police transmeter k dwara har policewale ko wha pahuchne ko kahne lge jise sunkar ins. surya bi gatnasthal ki taraf badne lga.
Chita dogalisis wing me maujud tha aur doga se sampark bna rha tha.
Doga jise abhi is hungame ki koi jankari nhi thi wah mumbai ki sadko par ghumta fir rha tha.ek jagah use kuch kutte goliyo se chalni dhikhayi pde aur sath hi vah sandesh bi. Jise padkar doga k chehre par phatte jwalamukhi se bhav aa gye aur usne dubara apni altrasonik city bjayi jise sunkar kutta fauz wha aa gyi.
Doga-bhonk grrr bhow bho bhaw bh gur grr(inhe kuch der pahle hi kisi ne mara hai wo gunde adhik dur nhi gye honge.unhi mahak ko sungho aur mujhe wha tak pahuchao).
Kutte gundho ki gandh sunghane lagte hai.
Tabhi doga k kano me fit riceivar par chita ki aawang gunjati hai-doga tumhari khoj me mumbai me aatank faila hua hai.sabhi mafiya gang wale eksath mil gye hai aur tumhe dhundh rhe hai.unke pass ghatak hatiyar hai.doga vapas aa jao.
Doga-kal ko kisi ka bhay nhi rahta wo darta nhi drata hai.aur doga bi apradiyo k liye ek kal hai.kal ko aaj apradhiyo ne khud bulaya hai to kal bi unke swagat me koi kmi nhi rahne dega.
Abhi bi wah saya doga k phiche lga hua tha.

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PostSubject: Re: KYA KRE DOGA   Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:49 am

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chita ne doga ko samjhana chaha par doga tha ki apni zid par ada tha.tang aakar cheeta ne sampark tod diya.
jaldi hi kutto ko gundo ki gandh mil gyi aur unhone doga ko btaya.
Doga ne kutto ko us ghand ka phicha karne ko kha.
Idhar police bi pahuch gyi thi gundo ko rokne par ab gundo ki sankhya kai guni jyada ho gyi thi.chota-bda har gunda 'doga ko mar dalo' abhiyan k liye is ladai me shamil ho gya tha.yha par sanki ne chalaki dhikhai. usne 2 dal bna diya. Ek dal police ko rokne me laga diya aur dusre dal ko doga ko khoj k marne k kam me lga diya. Pahle dal me sanki khud apne gang aur chote mote apradhiyo k sath tha police ko rokne k liye.aur dusre dal me sare mafiya boss aur unka gang doga ko marne k liye.sanki ki chalaki kisi ko samajh me nhi aayi.
Sanki wale grp ne police ko rok liya tha.police dal ka kaman ins. surya k hatho me tha.
Ins surya ne gundo ko chetavani di par gundo par koi asar nhi pda.ve abhi bi lut-pat karne me lge huye the unka maksad police party ka dhyan bhang karna tha taki police party unke dusre dal aur doga k bich me rukavte paida na kar ske.

Chetavni ka koi asar hota na dhekhkar ins. Surya ne firing ka aadesh de diya.jawab me dusri taraf se bi firing shuru ho gyi thi.

Dusra dal doga k pas pahunch gya tha ya yu kahiye doga ne unhe apni kutta fauj k sahare dund nikala tha.sabhi gunde bike car etc par par sawar the.

Ek mafia boss-tune hme kafi preshan kar liya aaj hum sab milkar tujhe kutte ki maut mar dalenge.zina hram kar rakha hai.mumbai ka bap banta hai na tu par aaj tujhe teri aaukat dikha denge hum.
Doga us mafia boss ki bate sun rha tha par usne kuch nhi bola uska chehra gusse se lal ho gya tha aur usne apne hatiyar ka munh khol diya agle hi pal vah mafiya boss mar gya.
Doga us mafia boss ki lash ko dhekhte huye-kisi ko marna ho to uske sath bakwas nhi uska shidha kam tamam karna chahiye warna kab wah palatwar kar de kuch nhi pta hota aur agar doga jaisi hasti ko marna hai to tujh jaise nali k kido ko ye bat pta honi chahiye thi.warna halki si bi chuk mahngi pad jati hai par afsos tujhe ye pta nhi tha.mai hmesha is bat ko dhyan me rakhta hu.
Doga k is karnaame se baki mafiya boss aur gunde ek pal k liye hairan se ho gye par agle hi pal we sabhi war karne k liye taiyar ho gye.
Ek mafiya boss-hathiyaro k dum par koi bi jeet sakta hai par himmat hai to hath-pairo se ladkar dhikha.
Doga-chuho me itni takat aa gyi ki vah kutte k sath lde.
Whi mafiya boss-ham chuhe nhi sher hai sher aur aaj shero k hatho ek kutta mara jayega.
Doga-wah aaj kai sher milkar ek kutte ka shikar karne aaye hai lanat hai aise shero par.khair yah kutta shero ka challange kabul karta hai lo maine bina hathiyar k ho gya.ab himmat hai to aa jao.
(aur doga ne apne sabhi asla-barood utar diye)

gundo k dal me se 10aadmi nikle aur doga par tut pde.par doga to doga tha.unke hath me nhi aaya.isbar gundo ne ek sath doga par chhalang lgayi par doga wha se hat chuka tha.sabhi gunde aapas me hi takra gye aur isi beech doga ne unpar war karna shuru kar diya har ek war k sath gundo ki haddiya shahid hoti ja rhi thi par doga na ruka aur doga jab ruka to sare gundo k sharir me ek bi haddi sabut nhi bachi thi.
Doga-ye sher to chuho se bi badtar hai.
Mafiya boss jhallkar-bhun dalo doga ko.
Doga par turant kai goliya chal pdi.
Par doga ne un gundo ko aage kar diya jinhe usne abhi behosh kiya tha.ve sabhi mar dale gye.unke shariro ko dhal bnakar doga ne apne hathiyar utha liye the.aur usne bi gundo par goliya barsani aarambh kar di.par jaldi hi gundo ka palda bhari hone lga kyuki ve vahan par sawar the doga ko goliyo k alava vahano se bi bachna pad rha tha aur use war karne ka mauka nhi mil rha tha.
vah rahsyamay saya bi is fight ko dekh rha tha.use lga ki doga ko madad ki jarurat hai aur wah saya wha se gayab ho gya aur kuch der bad ek bike par sawar ho wha pahucha aur doga ko jaldi se bike par baithne ko kha.doga uska chehra dhekh hairan ho gya.

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